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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:47 pm
by murpheyw
I think. Bump, anger; You bum!
I agree. Slip, slide, grease, hum.
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:21 am
by Maus
ERE Haiku:
Tree naked in wind --
the true way of retirement:
I need ever less.
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:37 am
by Matthew
I need not but bread and water
I want not but sight and banter
I hope not but for freedom and laughter
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:34 am
by Steve Austin
Accounts in order
To measure prevailing wind
That I weigh anchor
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:43 pm
by Marius
Bread and games
But no freedom and meaning
This cage is too small
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:09 pm
by Beaudacious
http://be-beaudacious.blogspot.com/search/label/Haiku
This one is one of my favorites from my past work:
Sudden winds of change
feel only of a light breeze
to the prepared few.
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:10 pm
by Jon
A haiku is 5-5-5 syllables right? Well, here's my cheesy attempt.
Innovative blog
makes me think about
being free early
Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:24 pm
by jacob
It's 5-7-5.
Include a seasonal reference somewhere and an implied question, exclamation or punctuation mark.
Extra points for ambiguity or multiple interpretations.
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:02 am
by Jon
Okay, another here's another... anime reference. Gurren Langan specifically.
Spiral power, Go!
The sky is our goal to see
Man will taste the stars
No seasonal or ambiguity points sorry.
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:25 am
by runrunruneateateat
At work, one sits still
It's never autumn indoors
My bike is freedom
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:32 pm
by Matthew
HERE we go without...
Without and without a doubt!
To last the Fall drought?