ERE Poem Chain.

Favorite quotations, etc.
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murpheyw
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Post by murpheyw » Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:47 pm

I think. Bump, anger; You bum!

I agree. Slip, slide, grease, hum.


Maus
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Post by Maus » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:21 am

ERE Haiku:
Tree naked in wind --

the true way of retirement:

I need ever less.


Matthew
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Post by Matthew » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:37 am

I need not but bread and water

I want not but sight and banter

I hope not but for freedom and laughter


Steve Austin
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Post by Steve Austin » Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:34 am

Accounts in order

To measure prevailing wind

That I weigh anchor


Marius
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Post by Marius » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:43 pm

Bread and games

But no freedom and meaning

This cage is too small


Beaudacious
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Post by Beaudacious » Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:09 pm

http://be-beaudacious.blogspot.com/search/label/Haiku
This one is one of my favorites from my past work:
Sudden winds of change

feel only of a light breeze

to the prepared few.


Jon
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Post by Jon » Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:10 pm

A haiku is 5-5-5 syllables right? Well, here's my cheesy attempt.
Innovative blog

makes me think about

being free early


jacob
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Post by jacob » Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:24 pm

It's 5-7-5.
Include a seasonal reference somewhere and an implied question, exclamation or punctuation mark.
Extra points for ambiguity or multiple interpretations.


Jon
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Post by Jon » Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:02 am

Okay, another here's another... anime reference. Gurren Langan specifically.
Spiral power, Go!

The sky is our goal to see

Man will taste the stars
No seasonal or ambiguity points sorry.


runrunruneateateat
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Post by runrunruneateateat » Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:25 am

At work, one sits still

It's never autumn indoors

My bike is freedom


Matthew
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Post by Matthew » Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:32 pm

HERE we go without...

Without and without a doubt!

To last the Fall drought?


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