ERE Poem Chain.

murpheyw · Post by **murpheyw** » Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:47 pm

I think. Bump, anger; You bum!

I agree. Slip, slide, grease, hum.

Maus · Post by **Maus** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:21 am

ERE Haiku:
Tree naked in wind --

the true way of retirement:

I need ever less.

Matthew · Post by **Matthew** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:37 am

I need not but bread and water

I want not but sight and banter

I hope not but for freedom and laughter

Steve Austin · Post by **Steve Austin** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:34 am

Accounts in order

To measure prevailing wind

That I weigh anchor

Marius · Post by **Marius** » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:43 pm

Bread and games

But no freedom and meaning

This cage is too small

Beaudacious · Post by **Beaudacious** » Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:09 pm

http://be-beaudacious.blogspot.com/search/label/Haiku
This one is one of my favorites from my past work:
Sudden winds of change

feel only of a light breeze

to the prepared few.

Jon · Post by **Jon** » Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:10 pm

A haiku is 5-5-5 syllables right? Well, here's my cheesy attempt.
Innovative blog

makes me think about

being free early

Post by **jacob** » Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:24 pm

It's 5-7-5.
Include a seasonal reference somewhere and an implied question, exclamation or punctuation mark.
Extra points for ambiguity or multiple interpretations.

Jon · Post by **Jon** » Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:02 am

Okay, another here's another... anime reference. Gurren Langan specifically.
Spiral power, Go!

The sky is our goal to see

Man will taste the stars
No seasonal or ambiguity points sorry.

runrunruneateateat · Post by **runrunruneateateat** » Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:25 am

At work, one sits still

It's never autumn indoors

My bike is freedom

Matthew · Post by **Matthew** » Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:32 pm

HERE we go without...

Without and without a doubt!

To last the Fall drought?